Monday, May 24, 2010

Smith Poem

I see
the wind
and taste
buildings in me
and feel
ground against my feet
and hear
fear
I need
life




This was about my experience seeing a tornado for the first time and seeing the damage after.

1 comment:

  1. Jake I really like how you took this poem and understood it for what it was and made it into an event that was in your life. You really stuck with the same pace as the original writer of the poem did.

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